Invitation: Sarah's bridal shower - part I

Since I've offered to host my friend Sarah's bridal shower, I am looking for inspirations to make her bridal shower invitation. To date, these long invitations have always appealed to me and I've been wanting to use them somehow.

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Today, I have drafted up a version of the invitation on the computer in which I will gocco onto metallic cardstocks in black/cream/red colors. I can't wait to get started.

Sorry for the blur out of the important and private info.